Friday 25 January 2013

OS one day with me


"geet where are u??i can't find u." said maan to geet on call
"wait. what is the hurry? try to figure me out."
"Oh god please geet don't play this hide and seek. i don't have more patience. i am having patience from  15 months. but now i can't wait anymore. please come." said an impatient maan looking here and there searching for his geet whom he is going to meet the first time.


Maan Singh Khurana a Middle Class man from Delhi and Geet Handa a Girl from a Middle class family too hailing from Mumbai. Maan's father a major in army and geet's dad a business man. Main aim of maan was to join Army and geet's was to become an expert in the field of robotics.
Maan and Geet became friends in social networking site through a relative of geet. they started talking and became friends. slowly they became addicted to each other's togetherness. they grew best of friends without meeting each other thou.
maneet became inseparable part of each other's life. they used to chat for hours. those hours started to change geet's perspective on love. the person who didn't believe in living life to fullest started to live life like a free bird. after a year of chatting finally maan asked geet her number as he wanted to talk to her. somehow geet tried to change the topic but due to her cousin's instance she gave the number telling him not to call her as she won't be picking the call.
then they started to be with each other mostly the whole day. this started creating changes in the heart of both maneet. both used to dream about each other. both knew what is happening in each other's life.
accidently if any day they didn't message then their night would be restless till they confirmed that the other is ok.
before 4 days of new year maan stopped messaging geet. whenever geet would message he wouldn't reply. he thought to give surprise to her but everything happened opposite. those two days were the worst days for her. she thought that maan was avoiding her. she stopped eating. her bubbliness was lost in 2 days. she stopped talking to everyone. she will only be seeing the phone expecting a message. it was new year's eve and till there was no response from maan.
slowly this was taking a toll on her and she fainted after noon. geet's mom and dad started to panic. they rushed her to hospital. the doctor said that it was because of weakness she fainted. they tried to feed geet but she didn't eat anything. always her eyes were on the mobile. her mother saw that and she tried to confort her but seeing the condition she stayed quiet.
the evening had passed and there were only 10 minutes for the new year to begin. till now there was no response from maan. geet started to lose hope. finally she decided to think about her parents how they will be feeling seeing her like that. finally she asked her mother to bring something for her to eat.
her mother became happy and went to the pantry to bring something for her. since the pantry was on the ground floor and geet's ward on the second it would take at least 20 minutes for her to return and there was only 3 minutes for 12.
geet thought that this new year she would close her eyes and won't think of anyone. when she closed her eyes her mobile rang indicating a call. thoughtfully geet reached her mobile and the caller id made geet to sigh in happiness. but she didn't want to melt so soon.
slowly she picked up the call to receive a screaming MAAN.
"HAPPY NEW YEAR GEET"
"HMMM..."
"WHAT HMM??WON'T U WISH ME??"
"HAPPY NEW YEAR"
"HMM. WHAT ARE U DOING?"
"NOTHING??"
suddenly something beeped in the room making maan alert.
"GEET TELL ME WHERE ARE U???"
"IN HOSPITAL"(fearing his reaction)
"HOSPITAL???WHAT ARE U DOING IN HOSPITAL??THAT TOO THIS TIME."
"THAT...I WAS NOT FEELING WELL.SO ONLY"
"GEET DON'T LIE TO ME.U KNOW THAT I KNOW U MORE THAN URSELF"
"I FAINTED TODAY BECAUSE OF WEAKNESS SO ONLY I AM IN HOSPITAL NOW."
"AND WHY DID U FAINT?"
"BECAUSE I  ..LEAVE THAT TELL NEW Y U DIDN'T TALK TO ME??"(trying desperately to change the topic coz once he knew it will get angry and cooling him down was impossible.)
 "DON'T U DARE CHANGE THE TOPIC.TELL ME Y U FAINTED"
"WOH U WERE NOT TALKING TO ME SO I DIDN'T EAT ANYTHING AND THEN ---"
"WHAT???ARE U CRAZY???"
"I KNOW U WILL GET ANGRY SO ONLY I WAS NOT TELLING."
"IF I WON'T GET ANGRY WHAT WILLL I DO...THIS IS TOTALLY UNACCEPTABLE.U KNOW THAT I DON'T LIKE THIS"
"I AM SORRY.SEE FIRST TIME WE ARE TALKING AND U ARE FIGHTING"
"I AM NOT FIGHTING"
both became happy with this realisation that first time they heard each other's voice that too one new year. both forgot their fight and relished this moment. suddenly geet's mom came so geet hid her mobile below her pillow. her mom felt change in her behaviour but left it. she wished her new year and fed her. maan to became happy and they talked for the first time.


it was 3 months to that incident. after that there was not a day that maan and geet had not talked to each other. and even if he plan any surprise then he will remember this incident and will cancel all his plans.
finally after the wait of 15 months maneet's dream was coming true. for some competition geet had to go to Delhi. but she didn't tell this to maan. she wanted to give a surprise. after reaching Delhi she talked many times to maan but somehow stopped herself from telling the news to maan. after the completion the prize winners were announced and geet had undoubtedly won the FIRST prize in a national competition.
she wanted to go to DARGA. and she thought that this was the right time to let maan know about her being here. she reached DARGA and called him.
"HI MAAN."
"HI GEET"
"ARE U FREE NOW?"
"FOR U I AM ALWAYS FREE."
"OK.TELL ME WHERE ARE U NOW"
"NOW AM OUT OF DARGRA."
"WHAT???"
"GEET SLOW.MY EARS WILL BUSRT"
"OK SORRY.ARE U REALLY OUTSIDE DARGA?"
while talking she saw him from far. she became happy. she wanted to run to him and tell that his geet had come to Delhi and she had won the national competition. but she controlled as she wanted to shock him so she continued the drama.
"YES GEET.U KNOW EVERY FRIDAY I WILL COME HER. THEN Y BEHAVING LIKE THIS?"
"WOH I TOTALLY FORGOT. SORRY."
"OK.BTW WHY DID U ASK THAT AM I FREE OR NOT?"
"THAT DO U REMEMBER THAT I TOLD U I HAVE MY NATIONAL COMPETETION COMING"
"YES SOME ROBOTICE COMPETITION.RIGHT?"
"YES.AND FOR UR KIND INFORMATION THAT COMPETITION HAD BEEN OVER J-U-S-T-N-O-W"(saying each word slowly and seeing his expressions for far. being shocked would be an understatement. the expressions were worth watching)
"WHAT?"
"YA.U HEARD IT RIGHT.IT IS OVER."
"THEN U DIDN'T PARTICIPATE.Y?"
"WHO TOLD I DIDN'T PARTICIPATE"(now the expression was the one of confusion. geet was laughing silently)
"DON'T CONFUSE. IF U PARTICIPATED THEN U MUST BE IN DELHI"
"FOR UR ONE MORE KIND INFORMATION NOW I AM IN DELHI THAT TI RIGHT NEAR U AND I CAN SEE U AND UR PRICE LESS EXPERSSIONS."

hearing this the MANNAT ROPE which he was tying dropped down and it took him more than 5 minutes to digest the fact. immediately his eyes started to search for geet. but was not able to find her since she hid.

BACK TO PRESENT:

maan was tired of searching from a long time. finally feeling pity on him slowly geet came back of him and tapped his shoulders from behind. maan turned to find the most beautiful girl of the whole universe in front of him. her almond eyes the most attractive. maan was lost staring. geet became conscious and started to see the floor. after sometime maan's trance broke making him realise what he was doing.
maan turned his face. suddenly there was a awkward silence between them. they never thought that they would be tongue tied when they will meet. geet started to walk inside maan too followed. geet washed her legs, hands and face and went inside to pray. maan was seeing her from far.
after praying she went to maan and they both went to the mannat place and both asked mannat's.(ll reveal later.)after that maan requested geet to spend the whole day with him.she gladly agreed as she too wanted to spend the day with him.
maan planned to show the whole Delhi. he was very happy on meeting her. his happiness was not under his control. in 10 minutes he had planned everything what to show where to take her and all.
geet became happy seeing him happy. in this happiness she forgot to tell the news which would make maan over the moon. suddenly she remembered.
"maan."
"yes geet."
they were driving in maan's car to go to INDIA GATE.
"won't u ask about the competition?"
"sorry geet. in happiness i totally forgot. how was it?"
"umm...ummm that..."(shuttering..)
"don't worry geet i wont scold u."
"i know u will not scold me. i have got award."
"wow. Congo. what award?"
"i got the award given to the first place."
the car came to a sudden stand still...
"WAHT??"
"first place."
"how many shocks should i get in one day??is there any other suspense for me??"
"no. nothing else."
"hmm..BTW congratulations."
"thank u."

they started the drive.. they reached INDIA GATE. after spending some time with each other they. they moved to different places. geet enjoyed a lot. unknown to her maan had planned a big surprise for her. it was evening and maan took her to a restaurant. he asked her to wait and he would return in 2 minutes.
geet agreed. 10 minutes had passed but maan didn't return. geet had seen maan going inside the restaurant. so she too went inside. she went to the reception. without her asking anything they told her to go to the seminar hall. geet got confused. she tried once more. but they didn't listen. without any option she went the way told by them. when she entered the hall there was no one present and it was dark. she thought that she had come to a wrong place and she started to go out suddenly one voice echoed inside the hall which geet immediately recognised as MAAN's.

"U HAVE ENTERED THE RIGHT PLACE GEET. THE RIGHT PLACE IS MY HEART. I KNOW U WILL BE THINKING WHAT AM I BLABBERING BUT THIS IS ONLY THE TRUTH GEET. U HAVE ENTERED MY HEART LONG TIME BACK. I SAW U LONG BACK WITH MY FRIEND VICKY WHO IS UR COUSIN. WITH THAY]T ONE LOOK I BECAME CRAZY ABOUT U. THEN FROM VICKY I CAME TO KNOW ABOUT U AND WHEN UR SMALL THINGS STARTED TO AFFECT ME I DIDN'T KNEW. THEN HE TOLD ME THAT U STAY IN MUMBAI I WAS HEART BROKEN.
I MYSELF DIDN'T KNEW IT. I STARTDE TO THINK OF U AS A FRIEND. AFTER SEEING ME IN UR MEMORIES VICKY FORCED MY TO CHAT WITH U THROUGH SOCIAL NETWORKING SITE. I AGREED. U ALSO STARTED TO TALK TO ME.
SLOWLY U TOO BECAME MY FRIEND. I BECAME VERY SAD AFTER KNOWING WHAT U THINK OF LIFE. SO I PROMISED TO CHANGE U TO A BUBBLY GEET. MY GEET. AND I WAS EVEN SUCCESSFUL IN IT. I ONLY WANTED TO BE UR FRIEND BUT I DIDN'T KNOW WHEN THAT MY HEART CROSSED ALL BOUNDRIES IN LOVING U.
YES GEET. I STARTED LOVING U. FROM WHEN EVEN I DON'T KNOW. TODAY I AM TELLING THIS CAUSE I KNOW TODAY I AM GETTING THE COURAGE. THEN I DON'T KNOW WHEN I WILL GET THIS COURAGE. EVEN IF U DON'T ACCEPT MY LOVE NO COMPLAINS GEET. THIS IS UR LIFE AND U HAVE FULL LIBERTY TO TAKE DECISION.
AND ONE MORE TING. I KNOW THAT U WON'T HURT UR PARENTS. AND I REALLY SUPPORT IN IT. DON'T WORRY ABOUT THEM. IF U AGREE THEN THEY WILL ALSO AGREE.

GEET WILL U MARRY ME AND BE MINE FOR MY WHOLE LIFE TIME."


the time maan completed this geet was fully in tears.
"maan please come in front of me. i want to see u and give u the answer."
hesitatingly maan came out.
"U KNOW ONE THING?EVEN I DON'T KNEW WHAT WAS THIS LOVE. BUT SEEING UR LOVE AND UR PATIENCE I CAME TO KNOW THE REAL MEANING OF LOVE. UR WORDS HAD MADE ME SPEECHLESS TOWARDS UR LOVE. EVEN I TOO DON'T KNOW WHEN THIS FRIENDSHIP BECAME MY LIFE. YES I AM READY TO BECOME MRS.MAAN SINGH KHURANA FOR MY WHOLE LIFE."

after hearing this maan in happiness hugged her tight. suddenly all lights came on and they separated from each other. Vicky came out making geet shocked.
G:vicky u??
V:not only my dear sister. see there.

slowly all the family members of geet came out. geet became nervous on what will she tell them. she saw maan. he blinked his eyes assuring her. geet's dad came and said.
GD: i am happy for u.
geet beamed in happiness.
G:u don't have any problem?
GM: y will v have problem? u are our daughter. ur happiness is our happiness.
GD: Vicky told me everything. if u are happy then v are happy.
G:thank u dad.

geet hugged her mom and dad. maan came and touched their feet. they blessed him wholeheartedly. there was a glow in geet's face which was no missed by both mom and dad and they felt proud on their decision.

finally the day arrived on which the two names maan and geet would be bound into a single name called maneet. it was their marriage and geet was dressed like an angel in the dress selected by her sweet hubby. and maan was looking dashing in the dress selected by his sweet wify.
the marriage rituals completed by maan filling geet's parting and tying mangalsurta to her neck. finally the priest declared them as husband and wife.
they took blessing of maan's family and geet's family. after bidaai maan took her to their paradise. after the "welcoming" ritual maan's mom caressed her face. in her warmth geet felt a touch of a mother and in the care of maan's dad she felt her own dad caring.
after 2 months of marriage it was maan's birthday. That day they had party. maan had gone for training. he was to return the evening.
geet was eagerly waiting for him. finally her wait was over. maan returned and he was sent to the room where geet was present. purposefully she kept a file on the front desk and went to washroom. maan came inside very eager to meet her. but was disappointed on not finding her in room. he thought to join her in the wash room while going to it his eyes caught the sight of the file.
he moved to the file and took it. the cover said that it was a medical file on geet's name. maan panicked and immediately opened the file.
it said that the PREGNENCY report was positive. maan was over the moon. very soon his angel would come.
geet came out and saw maan happy. maneet rejoiced and celebrated maan's birthday along with the family.

after 15 days maan had to again go to camp. he left after giving a dairy of instructions to geet. never geet complained on maan going on camp cause she knew that being in army was his passion.
he returned after 6 months. he saw geet started having bump. the first thing he did was to take her to doc. she did the sonography and gave one more good news that it was twins and now she must be more careful. and as 7th month had started they must be ready.

after a week it was her "GODH BHARAI". the whole family was very happy. after the function all retired to rooms since it was a tiring day. maan took geet to the terrace and made her sit there on his lap. they remembered all their precious memories. while talking suddenly geet started to scream in pain. maan immediately called his mom and dad and then rushed her to hospital.

the doctor had said to do C-section since it was twins. maan was walking to and fro. after what seems like ages they heard sound of baby cry. maan hugged his mom and dad. in a gap of 1 minutes they heard another cry. after cleaning the doctor came out and gave them the news that it is a girl then a boy. maan wanted to meet geet. doc said that after shifting they could meet.

in sometime geet was shifted and maan was made to go in first. maan went in tears of happiness clouded in his eyes seeing the most 3 precious gift of his life his wife and his 2 angle cuddled with each other.
slowly maan went to them. geet gave the girl to him. maan took her carefully hoping not to hurt the cute cotton ball. he saw that the baby boy also was very cute. out of the blue her said.
"geet i will love my pari only more."
"pari?"
"yes my pari."
"hmm..then i will team with karan and will trouble."
"ok. but my team will only be strong."

their fight would have been continued if there wouldn't have been a knock on the door. maan's parents came in and blessed geet and the two cotton balls.

this was a beginning of a new story...with the completion of their mannat

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